To start with one reason is many people can know about Josep Kony. I think we should mad
ke Kony famous so many people will know he is bad and criminal. Also, many people help army or spread information about him and lots of people can know about him. I know him because Angela teacher and Angela teacher may know about it from another person.
Moreover, we can help Uganda's poor children. Lots of people pay money to invisile children and send some food, clothes, money and toys to children. Lots of childrens are forcibly hit their parents and are hit or shot their friends.shot their friends. How bad is this brutality? Can you imagine if you lost your valuable people?
However, some people think little different about Joseph Kony. Some people thinks fund is not working well and some people in nvisible children. Therefore, Uganda children can't get lots of things just a few. Also, they do not want to make Kony famous. They think they do not need to make criminal person famous.
In conclusion, I'll tell you about some things that we must know. Joseph Kony is world popular criminal person and people need to help peop-le to stop his crimes. Now, did you choose your choice? What would be better? Make him famous or not. It's your choice.
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