This is my first camp at GLPS and my first post on my blog! I am very excited to make my own blog. I want to talk about three things I know to be true. First one is about sports. Second one is about reading books and the last one is about bad habits. Now, I want to share new information.
First, I want to talk about sports. Almost everyone likes sports. I like sports, too. Sports make us fun and healthy. It serves double purposes. Do you like soccer? I like soccer. Soccer is not hard to play. Everyone can play it easily, so I think lots of people like to play soccer.Do you have favorite sports?
How about starting to play soccer?
Secondly, I want to talk about `Reading books`. I like reading books. Also, it makes me smarter. Everyone knows that books make us smart. In my experience, reading helps me learn new things. In my sister`s school class, whoever reads books always gets good score. Also, books are food for the mind. Book is a kind of game from which we can gain new information.
Lastly, I will tell you about bad habits. Some people have bad habits. When we have bad habits, it's very hard to fix them. They can damage people's life. Sometimes, you see people who have a bad habit. It feels bad to look at them. For example of, you become CEO you'll have very important meetings with with other CEOs. However, if you twinkle your eyes lot of times, they will think that you're strange, and so the meetings might not go well as you expected. Do you still have a bad habit? Now, you need to fix it. It's very crucial.
In conclusion, I told you about three main points. First, Sports is fun and interesting. Second books are very good for our mind. Lastly, I said, bad habits are very dangerous. Did you read my post well? Let's share three things you know to be true.
Hi:)
ReplyDeleteI think it's a good esay and it's interesting!:)
But there is a thing that I want to tell you to get better.^-^ Is it OK? I hope so.^-^
That is...
You don't have any pictures or vedios in the post!
At the next time you wrote a post, please show me the picture or vedio.
It'll make your post more interesting.:)
But, It was a good post! :P
Hi- Please add pictures or videos to your blog. It will make it more interesting. The conclusion could also be stronger rather than just repeating what you wrote, try to say it in a different way.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your ideas, and I enjoyed reading your essay very much. It's a fun and interesting essay which introduces you fairly well; I was able to know more about you after reading this essay. Nevertheless, I suggest you put more pictures and video clips to invigorate and decorate your blog posts. Without them, it looks too formal.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, good luck!
Very interesting, but no pictures, so it would be easier to understand if you put some in.
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